[Detnet] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-detnet-ip-over-mpls-07: (with COMMENT)

Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Mon, 07 September 2020 20:47 UTC

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Subject: [Detnet] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-detnet-ip-over-mpls-07: (with COMMENT)

Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-detnet-ip-over-mpls-07: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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In the glossary, "L3" is specified, but it appears nowhere in this document. 
Same with "PSN".  Nor does "PE", but "S-PE" does, yet it is not defined.

I concur with Barry's comments on references.

[Detnet] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft… Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker
Re: [Detnet] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on d… Balázs Varga A