[dhcwg] Erik Kline's Yes on draft-ietf-dhc-v6only-06: (with COMMENT)

Erik Kline via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Sun, 09 August 2020 00:43 UTC

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COMMENT:
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[[ suggestions ]]

[ section 5 ]

* Consider redoing the table to instead match the columns in the registry.

  Perhaps:

      Tag: TBD
      Name: IPv6-only Preferred option
      Data Length: 4
      Meaning: IPv6-only Preferred option
      Reference: [THIS-RFC]


[[ nits ]]

[ section 3.2 ]

* Perhaps s/per interface enabled basis/per enabled interface basis/

[ section 3.3 ]

* s/assign an address for the pool/assign an address from the pool/