Re: [dhcwg] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dhc-addr-notification-08.txt

Michael Richardson <mcr+ietf@sandelman.ca> Wed, 17 January 2024 17:13 UTC

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Subject: Re: [dhcwg] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dhc-addr-notification-08.txt
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}           If revealing other hosts addresses and
} 	   alllowing onlink peer-to-peer communication is undesirable for a
} 	   given network segment, then layer2 (link-layer) isolation shall be
} 	   used.

I think you'll get a BCP14 query on "shall" here from the IESG.
(And I hate putting BCP14 into Security Considerations, so upcasing that
would not be my choice)

Is there a document that already says this?   Can we just write:

}           If revealing other hosts addresses and
} 	   alllowing onlink peer-to-peer communication is undesirable for a
} 	   given network segment, then the recommendations of [RFCXXXX] apply.

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