Re: [dhcwg] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC4361 (5426)
Tomek Mrugalski <tomasz.mrugalski@gmail.com> Mon, 16 July 2018 18:54 UTC
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From: Tomek Mrugalski <tomasz.mrugalski@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [dhcwg] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC4361 (5426)
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I've looked at this errata report. It looks valid. The text incorrectly referenced sections and the proposed text correctly updates it to proper values. Also, Ted's contact information is outdated. Added updated mail on cc: Tomek On 16/07/2018 09:01, RFC Errata System wrote: > The following errata report has been submitted for RFC4361, > "Node-specific Client Identifiers for Dynamic Host Configuration Protocol Version Four (DHCPv4)". > > -------------------------------------- > You may review the report below and at: > http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid5426 > > -------------------------------------- > Type: Editorial > Reported by: Nikolai Malykh <nmalykh@gmail.com> > > Section: 6 > > Original Text > ------------- > Here we specify changes to the behavior of DHCPv4 clients and > servers. We also specify changes to the wording in RFC 2131 and RFC > 2132. DHCPv4 clients, servers, and relay agents that conform to this > specification must implement RFC 2131 and RFC 2132 with the wording > changes specified in sections 6.3 and 6.4. > > > Corrected Text > -------------- > Here we specify changes to the behavior of DHCPv4 clients and > servers. We also specify changes to the wording in RFC 2131 and RFC > 2132. DHCPv4 clients, servers, and relay agents that conform to this > specification must implement RFC 2131 and RFC 2132 with the wording > changes specified in sections 6.4 and 6.5. > > > Notes > ----- > Incorrect references to sections of this document. > > Instructions: > ------------- > This erratum is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary, please > use "Reply All" to discuss whether it should be verified or > rejected. When a decision is reached, the verifying party > can log in to change the status and edit the report, if necessary. > > -------------------------------------- > RFC4361 (draft-ietf-dhc-3315id-for-v4-05) > -------------------------------------- > Title : Node-specific Client Identifiers for Dynamic Host Configuration Protocol Version Four (DHCPv4) > Publication Date : February 2006 > Author(s) : T. Lemon, B. Sommerfeld > Category : PROPOSED STANDARD > Source : Dynamic Host Configuration > Area : Internet > Stream : IETF > Verifying Party : IESG >
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