Re: [dhcwg] Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-dhc-v6only-03

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From: "Eric Vyncke (evyncke)" <evyncke@cisco.com>
To: Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com>, "secdir@ietf.org" <secdir@ietf.org>
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Thread-Topic: [dhcwg] Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-dhc-v6only-03
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Subject: Re: [dhcwg] Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-dhc-v6only-03
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Thank you Russ for your review :-)

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From: dhcwg <dhcwg-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of Russ Housley via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org>
Reply-To: Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com>
Date: Thursday, 18 June 2020 at 22:40
To: "secdir@ietf.org" <secdir@ietf.org>
Cc: "draft-ietf-dhc-v6only.all@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-dhc-v6only.all@ietf.org>rg>, "dhcwg@ietf.org" <dhcwg@ietf.org>rg>, "last-call@ietf.org" <last-call@ietf.org>
Subject: [dhcwg] Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-dhc-v6only-03

    Reviewer: Russ Housley
    Review result: Has Nits

    I reviewed this document as part of the Security Directorate's ongoing
    effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
    comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Security Area
    Directors.  Document authors, document editors, and WG chairs should
    treat these comments just like any other IETF Last Call comments.

    Document: draft-ietf-dhc-v6only-03
    Reviewer: Russ Housley
    Review Date: 2020-06-18
    IETF LC End Date: 2020-07-02
    IESG Telechat date: unknown

    Summary: Has Nits


    Major Concerns:

    None.


    Minor Concerns:

    Section 3.4 includes:

        V6ONLY_WAIT     The minimum time the client SHOULD stop the DHCPv4
                        configuration process for. MUST be no less than
                        MIN_V6ONLY_WAIT seconds. Default: 1800 seconds

    The second sentence should include a subject; and "MUST NOT" seems like
    a better wording to me.  I suggest:

        V6ONLY_WAIT     The minimum time for which the client SHOULD stop
                        the DHCPv4 configuration process. The value MUST NOT
                        be less than MIN_V6ONLY_WAIT seconds.
                        Default: 1800 seconds.


    Nits:

    Section 2: s/seems only natural/seems natural/

    Section 3.3.1: s/for V6ONLY_WAIT second/for V6ONLY_WAIT seconds/



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