Re: [dhcwg] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC8357 (6008)

"Bernie Volz (volz)" <volz@cisco.com> Thu, 05 March 2020 12:04 UTC

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From: "Bernie Volz (volz)" <volz@cisco.com>
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Subject: Re: [dhcwg] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC8357 (6008)
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The diagram is a bit off, but the text is correct that option-code and option-len are both 16-bits.

We can log errata that diagram is broken, but the text is correct.

- Bernie

> On Mar 5, 2020, at 6:08 AM, RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> wrote:
> 
> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8357,
> "Generalized UDP Source Port for DHCP Relay".
> 
> --------------------------------------
> You may review the report below and at:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid6008
> 
> --------------------------------------
> Type: Technical
> Reported by: Stéphane Bortzmeyer <bortzmeyer+ietf@nic.fr>
> 
> Section: 4.2
> 
> Original Text
> -------------
> Option-Code:  OPTION_RELAY_PORT. 16-bit value, 135.
> 
> Option-Len:  16-bit value to be set to 2.
> 
> Corrected Text
> --------------
> Option-Code:  OPTION_RELAY_PORT. 13-bit value, 135.
> 
> Option-Len:  19-bit value to be set to 2.
> 
> Notes
> -----
> Discrepancy between the diagram and the text noted by draft-mcquistin-augmented-ascii-diagrams-02
> 
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> 
> --------------------------------------
> RFC8357 (draft-ietf-dhc-relay-port-10)
> --------------------------------------
> Title               : Generalized UDP Source Port for DHCP Relay
> Publication Date    : March 2018
> Author(s)           : N. Shen, E. Chen
> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> Source              : Dynamic Host Configuration
> Area                : Internet
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG
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