Re: [Digitalmap-yang] Draft draft-havel-opsawg-digital-map / draft-havel-nmop-digital-map

[Olga Havel <[e-mail]>]

Dear all,

I submitted the draft after including merges from other authors and some minor editorial fixes.

draft-havel-nmop-digital-map-00 - Modeling the Digital Map based on RFC 8345: Sharing Experience and Perspectives (ietf.org)<https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-havel-nmop-digital-map/>

I also closed all open issues on github.

Best Regards,
Olga

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Subject: Draft draft-havel-opsawg-digital-map / draft-havel-nmop-digital-map

Dear All,

I made some updates to the draft-havel-opsawg-digital-map, please see the diff files attached (diff and new version I used for diff).

I also renamed it to draft-havel-nmop-digital-map. I am attaching both files, as I used opsawg for diff

The following are some changes done:

-        Addressed the following comments from the previous review:

o   Med comment to move from xml to md. The files draft-havel-opsawg-digital-map.md and  draft-havel-nmop-map.md and corresponding generated txt  added to the github https://github.com/OlgaHuawei/draft-olga-digital-map

o   Updated capitalized versus not capitalized throughout the document

o   Some editorial comments

-        Updated references to the later versions

-        Changed references to the

-        Added more info about candidate approaches and the suggestion to start working on RFC8345 bis – see sections 5.1.1, 5.1.2, 5.1.3, 5.1.4, 5.1.5, 5.1.6 and 5.1.7

-        Section 5.2

o   Resolved some open issues

o   Added circular dependencies issues as discussed with Oscar

-        Added more context to section 5.3 – added quotes of some guidelines from RFC8345 that should be taken into account when agreeing the approach of how to extend model

-        Added more context to section 5.5 and split it into the 2 subsections

-        Made some updates in the Section 6.3 that reflect the new ivy draft for network inventory

-        Updated conclusions to add the proposal to start working on RFC8345 bis

Please authors and contributors, make any changes in the and  draft-havel-nmop-map.md file. My plan is to submit it before the deadline on 4th March, so please update or send any comments prior to that.

Best Regards,
Olga