[Dime] Martin Duke's No Objection on draft-ietf-dime-group-signaling-13: (with COMMENT)

[Martin Duke via Datatracker <[e-mail]>]

Martin Duke has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-dime-group-signaling-13: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Sec 4.2.3

"The server responds with a  service-specific auth response and includes one or
multiple Session- Group-Info AVP with the SESSION_GROUP_ALLOCATION_ACTION flag
set and
   the Session-Group-Id AVP identifying the session group, to which the 
   identified session is to be assigned.  With the same response  message, the
   server may send one or multiple Session-Group-Info AVPs with the
   SESSION_GROUP_ALLOCATION_ACTION flag cleared and the Session-Group-Id AVP
   identifying the session groups from which the identified session is to be
   removed."

s/may/MAY, to match similar text in 4.2.2. Much as in that section, it is a
little subtle that the state can be totally inferred by the first requirement,
and the second MAY requirement is purely advisory.