Re: [Dime] AD review of draft-ietf-dime-pmip6-02.txt

Thanks Dan again for the review and progressing the I-D.

On Jul 22, 2009, at 2:26 PM, Romascanu, Dan (Dan) wrote:

> Please find below the AD review of draft-ietf-dime-pmip6-02.txt. I
> believe that this I-D is stable and clear enough, and it can be
> submitted to IETF Last Call. Please consider the following comments
> together with the other IETF Last Call comments.
>
> 1. Section 4.8 describes the usage of the Service-Selection AVP and is
> normative as far as I understand. As this AVP is re-used from [I-D.
> ietf-dime-mip6-split] I believe that that I-D should be a normative
> reference rather than an informative reference. I do not see any  
> problem
> with this, as [I-D. ietf-dime-mip6-split] is also aiming to be a PS  
> and
> is ahead of this I-D, already in the RFC Editor queue.

Fine with me (don't know why it actually was informative in the first  
place). We'll change this.

>
> 2. Please expand DHCP at its first occurrence in the text.

Ack.

>
> 3. Running id-nits results in a number of I-Ds having more recent
> versions, I guess the RFC Editor will catch those when the document  
> will
> be in their hands.

Ack.

Cheers,
	Jouni

>
> Regards,
>
> Dan
>
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