[Dime] Review of draft-ietf-dime-e2e-sec-req-02
Tom Taylor <tom.taylor.stds@gmail.com> Tue, 07 April 2015 20:36 UTC
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Subject: [Dime] Review of draft-ietf-dime-e2e-sec-req-02
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I support the forwarding of this document to the IESG subject to the following comments. Tom Taylor Substantive Comment: Req. 1: the definition of crypto-agility is unnecessary, since the term is not used in the rest of the document. I suggest rephrasing the first sentence as follows: NEW Solutions MUST be able to evolve to adapt to evolving cryptographic algorithms and security requirements. Nits: Sec. 1 second paragraph, second sentence: s/lead/led/ Sec. 3 first line: s/follow/following/ Sec. 4, paragraph below Fig. 4, second-last line: s/number/numbers/ Sec. 4, paragraph below Fig. 5, last sentence: s/most benefits/the most benefits/ s/full-backwards/fully backwards/ Req. 3, second sentence: s/Any Diameter node has an access/All Diameter nodes have access/