[Dime] AD review of draft-ietf-dime-congestion-flow-attributes-01.txt

Kathleen Moriarty <kathleen.moriarty.ietf@gmail.com> Sat, 18 April 2015 15:02 UTC

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Subject: [Dime] AD review of draft-ietf-dime-congestion-flow-attributes-01.txt
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Hello,

I reviewed draft-ietf-dime-congestion-flow-attributes-01.txt and think it
is ready for IETF last call.  I only see one nit and that would be on first
use of AVP, you should include the acronym, attribute-value pairs (AVP).

You can make this change with any others that come in during last call.  If
the WG agrees, I'll kick off last call on Monday and get it ready to go
over the weekend if I hear back.

Thank you.

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Best regards,
Kathleen