Re: [dispatch] [sipcore] Draft new: draft-holmberg-dispatch-pani-abnf-00 [was: [Technical Errata Reported] RFC7315 (4474)]

Thanks for the quick update! Looks good.

Jean

On 10/27/15 5:15 PM, Christer Holmberg wrote:
> Hi,
>
> The new version can be seen at: https://github.com/cdh4u/draft-pani-abnf
>
> I'll submit it when the submission window opens.
>
> Regards,
>
> Christer
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: sipcore [mailto:sipcore-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Christer Holmberg
> Sent: 28 October 2015 00:03
> To: A. Jean Mahoney <mahoney@nostrum.com>; Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com>
> Cc: DISPATCH list <dispatch@ietf.org>; SIPCORE <sipcore@ietf.org>
> Subject: Re: [sipcore] [dispatch] Draft new: draft-holmberg-dispatch-pani-abnf-00 [was: [Technical Errata Reported] RFC7315 (4474)]
>
> Hi Jean,
>
> Thanks for your comments! I will update the draft according to your suggestions.
>
> Regards,
>
> Christer
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: A. Jean Mahoney [mailto:mahoney@nostrum.com]
> Sent: 27 October 2015 23:46
> To: Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com>; Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com>
> Cc: DISPATCH list <dispatch@ietf.org>; SIPCORE <sipcore@ietf.org>
> Subject: Re: [dispatch] Draft new: draft-holmberg-dispatch-pani-abnf-00 [was: [sipcore] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC7315 (4474)]
>
> Hi Christer,
>
> The draft looks good to me. Just a few nits:
>
> 1. Introduction
>
> 2nd paragraph: "requires new values are required" => "requires new values".
>
> 4th paragraph: "have been followed" => "have been defined"
>
> You may also consider adding a reference to TS 24.229, which defines values for access-info, to the 4th paragraph.
>
> Thanks!
>
> Jean
>
>
> On 10/18/15 2:10 PM, Christer Holmberg wrote:
>> Hi,
>>
>> I've submitted a new version, -01, where the category is changed to 'Informational'.
>>
>> Regards,
>>
>> Christer
>>
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: dispatch [mailto:dispatch-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of
>> Christer Holmberg
>> Sent: 18 October 2015 21:59
>> To: Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com>
>> Cc: DISPATCH list <dispatch@ietf.org>; SIPCORE <sipcore@ietf.org>
>> Subject: Re: [dispatch] Draft new:
>> draft-holmberg-dispatch-pani-abnf-00 [was: [sipcore] [Technical Errata
>> Reported] RFC7315 (4474)]
>>
>> Hi,
>>
>>> If 7315 is informational, why does the update need to be standards track?
>>
>> Good point - I guess it doesn't have to :)
>>
>> Regards,
>>
>> Christer
>>
>>
>> On 18 Oct 2015, at 6:49, Christer Holmberg wrote:
>>
>>> Hi,
>>>
>>> Based on Ben’s guidance, I’ve submitted a draft which makes the ABNF
>>> update.
>>>
>>> NOTE: As RFC 7315 is an Informational RFC, I had to add the RFC as an
>>> Informative reference in the draft, in order to pass the Idnits check.
>>>
>>>
>>> A new version of I-D, draft-holmberg-dispatch-pani-abnf-00.txt
>>>
>>> has been successfully submitted by Christer Holmberg and posted to
>>> the IETF repository.
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> Name:                 draft-holmberg-dispatch-pani-abnf
>>>
>>> Revision:            00
>>>
>>> Title:                    P-Access-Network-Info ABNF Update
>>>
>>> Document date:              2015-10-18
>>>
>>> Group:                Individual Submission
>>>
>>> Pages:                 4
>>>
>>> URL:
>>> https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-holmberg-dispatch-pani-abn
>>> f
>>> -00.txt
>>>
>>> Status:
>>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-holmberg-dispatch-pani-abnf/
>>>
>>> Htmlized:
>>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-holmberg-dispatch-pani-abnf-00
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> Abstract:
>>>
>>> This document updates RFC 7315, by modifying the extension-access-
>>>
>>> info part of the P-Access-Network-Info header field Augmented Backus-
>>>
>>> Naur Form (ABNF).
>>>
>>>
>>> Regards,
>>>
>>> Christer
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> From: sipcore [mailto:sipcore-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Christer
>>> Holmberg
>>> Sent: 18 October 2015 10:52
>>> To: Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com>
>>> Cc: DISPATCH list <dispatch@ietf.org>; SIPCORE <sipcore@ietf.org>;
>>> Cullen Jennings <fluffy@iii.ca>
>>> Subject: Re: [sipcore] [dispatch] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC7315
>>> (4474)
>>>
>>> Hi,
>>>
>>> So, shall I address the draft to some WG, or?
>>>
>>> draft-holmberg-dispatch ?
>>>
>>> Regards,
>>>
>>> Christer
>>>
>>> Sent from my Windows Phone
>>> ________________________________
>>> From: Ben Campbell<mailto:ben@nostrum.com>
>>> Sent: ‎14/‎10/‎2015 17:21
>>> To: Christer Holmberg<mailto:christer.holmberg@ericsson.com>
>>> Cc: Cullen Jennings<mailto:fluffy@iii.ca>; DISPATCH
>>> list<mailto:dispatch@ietf.org>; SIPCORE<mailto:sipcore@ietf.org>
>>> Subject: Re: [sipcore] [dispatch] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC7315
>>> (4474)
>>> On 8 Oct 2015, at 21:03, Christer Holmberg wrote:
>>>
>>>> Hi Cullen,
>>>>
>>>> So, you are suggesting a SIPCORE draft that updates the ABNF?
>>>
>>> This is where the chairs will point out that special-purpose
>>> extensions are generally not in scope for sipcore :-) If so, this
>>> might could also be done as AD sponsored.
>>>
>>> Ben.
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