Re: [dispatch] [sipcore] Draft new: draft-holmberg-dispatch-pani-abnf-00 [was: [Technical Errata Reported] RFC7315 (4474)]
"A. Jean Mahoney" <mahoney@nostrum.com> Tue, 27 October 2015 22:18 UTC
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Subject: Re: [dispatch] [sipcore] Draft new: draft-holmberg-dispatch-pani-abnf-00 [was: [Technical Errata Reported] RFC7315 (4474)]
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Thanks for the quick update! Looks good. Jean On 10/27/15 5:15 PM, Christer Holmberg wrote: > Hi, > > The new version can be seen at: https://github.com/cdh4u/draft-pani-abnf > > I'll submit it when the submission window opens. > > Regards, > > Christer > > -----Original Message----- > From: sipcore [mailto:sipcore-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Christer Holmberg > Sent: 28 October 2015 00:03 > To: A. Jean Mahoney <mahoney@nostrum.com>; Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com> > Cc: DISPATCH list <dispatch@ietf.org>; SIPCORE <sipcore@ietf.org> > Subject: Re: [sipcore] [dispatch] Draft new: draft-holmberg-dispatch-pani-abnf-00 [was: [Technical Errata Reported] RFC7315 (4474)] > > Hi Jean, > > Thanks for your comments! I will update the draft according to your suggestions. > > Regards, > > Christer > > -----Original Message----- > From: A. Jean Mahoney [mailto:mahoney@nostrum.com] > Sent: 27 October 2015 23:46 > To: Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com>; Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com> > Cc: DISPATCH list <dispatch@ietf.org>; SIPCORE <sipcore@ietf.org> > Subject: Re: [dispatch] Draft new: draft-holmberg-dispatch-pani-abnf-00 [was: [sipcore] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC7315 (4474)] > > Hi Christer, > > The draft looks good to me. Just a few nits: > > 1. Introduction > > 2nd paragraph: "requires new values are required" => "requires new values". > > 4th paragraph: "have been followed" => "have been defined" > > You may also consider adding a reference to TS 24.229, which defines values for access-info, to the 4th paragraph. > > Thanks! > > Jean > > > On 10/18/15 2:10 PM, Christer Holmberg wrote: >> Hi, >> >> I've submitted a new version, -01, where the category is changed to 'Informational'. >> >> Regards, >> >> Christer >> >> -----Original Message----- >> From: dispatch [mailto:dispatch-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of >> Christer Holmberg >> Sent: 18 October 2015 21:59 >> To: Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com> >> Cc: DISPATCH list <dispatch@ietf.org>; SIPCORE <sipcore@ietf.org> >> Subject: Re: [dispatch] Draft new: >> draft-holmberg-dispatch-pani-abnf-00 [was: [sipcore] [Technical Errata >> Reported] RFC7315 (4474)] >> >> Hi, >> >>> If 7315 is informational, why does the update need to be standards track? >> >> Good point - I guess it doesn't have to :) >> >> Regards, >> >> Christer >> >> >> On 18 Oct 2015, at 6:49, Christer Holmberg wrote: >> >>> Hi, >>> >>> Based on Ben’s guidance, I’ve submitted a draft which makes the ABNF >>> update. >>> >>> NOTE: As RFC 7315 is an Informational RFC, I had to add the RFC as an >>> Informative reference in the draft, in order to pass the Idnits check. >>> >>> >>> A new version of I-D, draft-holmberg-dispatch-pani-abnf-00.txt >>> >>> has been successfully submitted by Christer Holmberg and posted to >>> the IETF repository. >>> >>> >>> >>> Name: draft-holmberg-dispatch-pani-abnf >>> >>> Revision: 00 >>> >>> Title: P-Access-Network-Info ABNF Update >>> >>> Document date: 2015-10-18 >>> >>> Group: Individual Submission >>> >>> Pages: 4 >>> >>> URL: >>> https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-holmberg-dispatch-pani-abn >>> f >>> -00.txt >>> >>> Status: >>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-holmberg-dispatch-pani-abnf/ >>> >>> Htmlized: >>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-holmberg-dispatch-pani-abnf-00 >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> Abstract: >>> >>> This document updates RFC 7315, by modifying the extension-access- >>> >>> info part of the P-Access-Network-Info header field Augmented Backus- >>> >>> Naur Form (ABNF). >>> >>> >>> Regards, >>> >>> Christer >>> >>> >>> >>> >>> From: sipcore [mailto:sipcore-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Christer >>> Holmberg >>> Sent: 18 October 2015 10:52 >>> To: Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com> >>> Cc: DISPATCH list <dispatch@ietf.org>; SIPCORE <sipcore@ietf.org>; >>> Cullen Jennings <fluffy@iii.ca> >>> Subject: Re: [sipcore] [dispatch] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC7315 >>> (4474) >>> >>> Hi, >>> >>> So, shall I address the draft to some WG, or? >>> >>> draft-holmberg-dispatch ? >>> >>> Regards, >>> >>> Christer >>> >>> Sent from my Windows Phone >>> ________________________________ >>> From: Ben Campbell<mailto:ben@nostrum.com> >>> Sent: 14/10/2015 17:21 >>> To: Christer Holmberg<mailto:christer.holmberg@ericsson.com> >>> Cc: Cullen Jennings<mailto:fluffy@iii.ca>; DISPATCH >>> list<mailto:dispatch@ietf.org>; SIPCORE<mailto:sipcore@ietf.org> >>> Subject: Re: [sipcore] [dispatch] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC7315 >>> (4474) >>> On 8 Oct 2015, at 21:03, Christer Holmberg wrote: >>> >>>> Hi Cullen, >>>> >>>> So, you are suggesting a SIPCORE draft that updates the ABNF? >>> >>> This is where the chairs will point out that special-purpose >>> extensions are generally not in scope for sipcore :-) If so, this >>> might could also be done as AD sponsored. >>> >>> Ben. >> _______________________________________________ >> dispatch mailing list >> dispatch@ietf.org >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dispatch >> _______________________________________________ >> dispatch mailing list >> dispatch@ietf.org >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dispatch >> > > _______________________________________________ > sipcore mailing list > sipcore@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/sipcore >
- [dispatch] Draft new: draft-holmberg-dispatch-pan… Christer Holmberg
- Re: [dispatch] Draft new: draft-holmberg-dispatch… Ben Campbell
- Re: [dispatch] Draft new: draft-holmberg-dispatch… Christer Holmberg
- Re: [dispatch] Draft new: draft-holmberg-dispatch… Christer Holmberg
- Re: [dispatch] Draft new: draft-holmberg-dispatch… Cullen Jennings
- Re: [dispatch] Draft new: draft-holmberg-dispatch… Paul Kyzivat
- Re: [dispatch] Draft new: draft-holmberg-dispatch… A. Jean Mahoney
- Re: [dispatch] Draft new: draft-holmberg-dispatch… Christer Holmberg
- Re: [dispatch] [sipcore] Draft new: draft-holmber… Christer Holmberg
- Re: [dispatch] [sipcore] Draft new: draft-holmber… A. Jean Mahoney