[dmarc-ietf] Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ietf-dmarc-rfc7601bis-04: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: [dmarc-ietf] Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ietf-dmarc-rfc7601bis-04: (with COMMENT)
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Adam Roach has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-dmarc-rfc7601bis-04: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dmarc-rfc7601bis/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Thanks to everyone for the work that went into this revision. I agree with Ben's DISCUSS. In particular, I'm concerned by the text in §6.4, which indicates that the IANA registry will continue to point at RFC 7410 while the actual *meaning* of those values will mean something different than RFC 7410 defines. At a minimum, I think this document needs to add itself to the IANA table for those entries. But I think the cleanest approach -- and the one that is most consistent with the predecessor documents to this one -- is to copy the IANA entries forward with an indication that the values are already registered, but should be updated to point to this document. --------------------------------------------------------------------------- RFC 7208 is referred to by both [SPF] and [RFC7208], while only appearing as [SPF] in the references section. Consider rationalizing this. I recognize that the title was copied directly from RFC 7601, but please consider revising it to indicate that this document pertains to email. --------------------------------------------------------------------------- §1.5.1: > The key words "MUST", "MUST NOT", "REQUIRED", "SHALL", "SHALL NOT", > "SHOULD", "SHOULD NOT", "RECOMMENDED", "MAY", and "OPTIONAL" in this > document are to be interpreted as described in [KEYWORDS]. Please consider updating to match the boilerplate in RFC 8174. --------------------------------------------------------------------------- I have otherwise reviewed the diffs from RFC 7601, and find nothing to comment on. I echo Ben's comments thanking you for making limited changes to the document.