[DMM] Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ietf-dmm-pmipv6-dlif-05: (with COMMENT)

Adam Roach via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Thu, 05 March 2020 05:20 UTC

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Subject: [DMM] Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ietf-dmm-pmipv6-dlif-05: (with COMMENT)
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Adam Roach has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-dmm-pmipv6-dlif-05: No Objection

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Thanks for the work on this document. I have only one editorial suggestion.

Section 3.6:

>   to-point link) with MN1, exposing itself as a (logical) router with a
>   specific MAC (e.g., 00:11:22:33:01:01) and IPv6 addresses (e.g.,

Please use a MAC address from the range reserved for documentation purposes by
section 2.1.1 of RFC 7042.