Re: [DMM] FW: I-D Action: draft-ietf-dmm-deployment-models-01.txt
Do Truong Xuan <thespring1989@gmail.com> Tue, 19 September 2017 15:13 UTC
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From: Do Truong Xuan <thespring1989@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [DMM] FW: I-D Action: draft-ietf-dmm-deployment-models-01.txt
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Dear Seil ! I have some comments on deployment architecture document as follows: + In the Figure 1, the authors mentioned about primitive function "NSH classifier" supported by H-DPA or A-DPN, could you elaborate more how this service could support DMM. + Other service primitive such as IP management, IP anchoring, mobility + controller deserve more explanation to better understand the DMM + functions In Section 4.3, model 3, IMO this is centralized + architecture for signaling and distributed for data plane functions + similar to SDN architecture. However, in description text, authors + wrote "this is a flat architecture" --> need more elaboration Some other spelling errors: + in Section 3.2.1, homd-dpa --> home-dpa Section 3.2.5, DMM function + --> DMM functions BRs,
- [DMM] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dmm-deployment-model… internet-drafts
- [DMM] FW: I-D Action: draft-ietf-dmm-deployment-m… Seil Jeon
- Re: [DMM] FW: I-D Action: draft-ietf-dmm-deployme… Do Truong Xuan
- Re: [DMM] FW: I-D Action: draft-ietf-dmm-deployme… Do Truong Xuan
- Re: [DMM] FW: I-D Action: draft-ietf-dmm-deployme… Seil Jeon
- Re: [DMM] FW: I-D Action: draft-ietf-dmm-deployme… Dirk.von-Hugo
- Re: [DMM] FW: I-D Action: draft-ietf-dmm-deployme… Seil Jeon
- Re: [DMM] FW: I-D Action: draft-ietf-dmm-deployme… Do Truong Xuan
- Re: [DMM] FW: I-D Action: draft-ietf-dmm-deployme… Seil Jeon