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Re: [DMM] FW: I-D Action: draft-ietf-dmm-deployment-models-01.txt

Do Truong Xuan <thespring1989@gmail.com> Tue, 19 September 2017 15:19 UTC

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From: Do Truong Xuan <thespring1989@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [DMM] FW: I-D Action: draft-ietf-dmm-deployment-models-01.txt
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Dear Seil !

I have some comments on deployment architecture document as follows:



+ In the Figure 1, the authors mentioned about primitive function "NSH
classifier" supported by H-DPA or A-DPN, could you elaborate more how this
service could support DMM.

+ Other service primitive such as IP management, IP anchoring,
mobility controller
deserve more explanation to better understand the DMM functions

+ In Section 4.3, model 3, IMO this is centralized architecture for
signaling and distributed for data plane functions similar to SDN
architecture. However, in description text, authors  wrote "this is a flat
architecture" --> need more elaboration



Some other spelling errors:

+ in Section 3.2.1, homd-dpa --> home-dpa

 + Section 3.2.5, DMM function --> DMM functions
BRs,

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