Re: [dnsext] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dnsext-dnssec-algo-signal-06

[Matthijs Mekking <[e-mail]>]

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Hi,

I agree with Alfred. I have the following nit comments that can also
be easily fixed later (see below).

Best regards,
  Matthijs


Nits:

Section 1 (Introduction):
                           v
"These algorithm codes tells..." -> "These algorithm codes tell..."

                                    v              v
"Likewise, Delegation Signer (DS) RR's and NSEC3 RR's use..." ->
"Likewise, Delegation Signer (DS) RRs and NSEC3 RRs use..."

                                    vv
"deployment of code that implements a newly deployed digital signature
algorithm, DS hash and NSEC3 hash algorithm used..." ->
         ^                                 ^
"deployment of code that implements newly deployed digital signature
algorithms, DS hash and NSEC3 hash algorithms used..."

                      vvvvvvvvvvvvvv
"A zone administrator may be able to determine..." -> "A zone
administrator is able to determine..." or "A zone administrator may
determine..."

Section 2:
      vv
"The ENDS0 specification..." -> "The EDNS0 specification..."

             v
"take up 22-34 octets..." -> "take up 22-32 octets..."

On 05/04/2012 08:46 PM, Alfred � wrote:
> With the exception of the minor oversight of repeated occurrences 
> of a single textual flaw pointed out in my WGLC comments, I am 
> satisfied with the revised draft version (-06).
> 
> Applying the change from "cryptographic and hash algorithms" (or
> similar) to "digital signature and hash algorithms" twice more (in
> the Abstract and in Section 8) should not need another draft 
> iteration now -- that can easily be fixed later.
> 
> So IMHO, the draft now should be ready for publication request to
> the IESG.
> 
> Best regards, Alfred.
> 
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