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Re: [DNSOP] Robert Wilton's No Objection on draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-catalog-zones-08: (with COMMENT)

Peter Thomassen <peter@desec.io> Thu, 05 January 2023 12:57 UTC

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Subject: Re: [DNSOP] Robert Wilton's No Objection on draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-catalog-zones-08: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Robert,

Thanks for your review.

On 1/5/23 13:22, Robert Wilton via Datatracker wrote:
> Minor level comments:
> 
> (1) p 2, sec 2.  Terminology
> 
>     The key words "MUST", "MUST NOT", "REQUIRED", "SHALL", "SHALL NOT",
>     "SHOULD", "SHOULD NOT", "RECOMMENDED", "NOT RECOMMENDED", "MAY", and
>     "OPTIONAL" in this document are to be interpreted as described in BCP
>     14 [RFC2119][RFC8174] when, and only when, they appear in all
>     capitals, as shown here.
> 
> Is there a reference to generic DNS terminology that could be imported here.
> This may aid readers less familiar with DNS.

Thank you for suggesting this. We already have made this improvement in the following PR that also contains and will be merged along with changes from other reviews: https://github.com/NLnetLabs/draft-toorop-dnsop-dns-catalog-zones/pull/55/commits

> Nit level comments:
> 
> (2) p 12, sec 6.  Implementation and operational Notes
> 
>       For example
>     if the catalog is generated by some script and this script for
>     whatever reason generates an empty catalog, millions of member zones
>     may get deleted from their secondaries within seconds and all the
>     affected domains may be offline in a blink.
> 
> Minor bit, but I would expect the phrase to be "in a blink of an eye".
Done (now in the above PR).

Best,
Peter

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