Re: [DNSOP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-fix-02.txt

[Bob Harold <[e-mail]>]

On Sun, Jul 15, 2018 at 9:21 AM <[e-mail]> wrote:

>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Domain Name System Operations WG of the
> IETF.
>
>         Title           : DNS Attrleaf Changes: Fixing Specifications with
> Underscored Node Name Use
>         Author          : Dave Crocker
>         Filename        : draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-fix-02.txt
>         Pages           : 13
>         Date            : 2018-07-15
>
> Abstract:
>    Original uses of an underscore character as a domain node name
>    prefix, which creates a space for constrained interpretation of
>    resource records, were specified without the benefit of an IANA
>    registry.  This produced an entirely uncoordinated set of name-
>    creation activities, all drawing from the same namespace.  A registry
>    now has been defined.  However the existing specifications that use
>    underscore naming need to be modified, to be in line with the new
>    registry.  This document specifies those changes.  The changes
>    preserve existing software and operational practice, while adapting
>    the specifications for those practices to the newer underscore
>    registry model.
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-fix/
>
> There are also htmlized versions available at:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-fix-02
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-fix-02
>
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-fix-02
>
>
Minor nit:

3.1.  SRV Specification Changes

"The specification for a domain name under, which an SRV [RFC2782] resource
record appears, provides a template for use of underscored node names."

"under which" is a phrase that should not be broken with a comma.  Perhaps:

"The specification for a domain name, under which an SRV [RFC2782] resource
record appears, provides a template for use of underscored node names."

-- 
Bob Harold