Re: [DNSOP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dnsop-session-signal-10.txt

Tom Pusateri <pusateri@bangj.com> Thu, 07 June 2018 18:32 UTC

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Subject: Re: [DNSOP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dnsop-session-signal-10.txt
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> On Jun 7, 2018, at 1:56 PM, Bob Harold <rharolde@umich.edu> wrote:
> 
> 
> On Thu, Jun 7, 2018 at 1:43 PM Tom Pusateri <pusateri@bangj.com <mailto:pusateri@bangj.com>> wrote:
> This updated version adds some minor changes requested by Warren including anycast clarifcation, a new RFC reference, and IANA helpers.
> 
> Tom
> 
> Minor nit:
> 
> In the added paragraph, the line:
> "If after the connection is, the client's assumption"
> 
> Needs another word, like 'resumed' or 'recreated' or such:
> "If after the connection is recreated, the client's assumption"
>  
> -- 
> Bob Harold

Thanks! Fixed on github. We’ll wait for more feedback from the review process to submit a new version.

Tom