[DNSOP] Artart telechat review of draft-ietf-dnsop-avoid-fragmentation-16

Barry Leiba via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Sat, 30 December 2023 03:40 UTC

Return-Path: <noreply@ietf.org>
X-Original-To: dnsop@ietf.org
Delivered-To: dnsop@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from ietfa.amsl.com (localhost [IPv6:::1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4AF26C151993; Fri, 29 Dec 2023 19:40:52 -0800 (PST)
MIME-Version: 1.0
Content-Type: text/plain; charset="utf-8"
Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit
From: Barry Leiba via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org>
To: art@ietf.org
Cc: dnsop@ietf.org, draft-ietf-dnsop-avoid-fragmentation.all@ietf.org, last-call@ietf.org
X-Test-IDTracker: no
X-IETF-IDTracker: 12.1.0
Auto-Submitted: auto-generated
Precedence: bulk
Message-ID: <170390765227.35660.13790056130891751625@ietfa.amsl.com>
Reply-To: Barry Leiba <barryleiba@computer.org>
Date: Fri, 29 Dec 2023 19:40:52 -0800
Archived-At: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/dnsop/qF54AS66r0Qi8c3fLLD89vfe9Kw>
Subject: [DNSOP] Artart telechat review of draft-ietf-dnsop-avoid-fragmentation-16
X-BeenThere: dnsop@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.39
List-Id: IETF DNSOP WG mailing list <dnsop.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/dnsop>, <mailto:dnsop-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/browse/dnsop/>
List-Post: <mailto:dnsop@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:dnsop-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dnsop>, <mailto:dnsop-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Sat, 30 Dec 2023 03:40:52 -0000

Reviewer: Barry Leiba
Review result: Ready with Nits

Thanks for addressing most comments from my earlier review.  One remains, and I
didn’t see an email response about it, so I don’t know whether there was a
reason not to make a change or if it just got overlooked:

— Section 7.2 —

   If a UDP response packet is dropped (for any reason), it increases
   the attack window for poisoning the requestor's cache.

But Section 3.2 says this:

   R7.  UDP requestors MAY drop fragmented DNS/UDP responses without IP
   reassembly to avoid cache poisoning attacks.

…which seems to be contradictory.  Can you clarify this apparent contradiction
in one place or both?