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Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for draft-ietf-dnsop-maintain-ds

Bob Harold <rharolde@umich.edu> Tue, 05 April 2016 13:42 UTC

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From: Bob Harold <rharolde@umich.edu>
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Subject: Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for draft-ietf-dnsop-maintain-ds
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On Sun, Apr 3, 2016 at 11:25 PM, Ólafur Guðmundsson <olafur@cloudflare.com>
wrote:

>
> Dear colleagues,
> a new version of the document has been posted that fixes few minor
> grammatical and spelling errors.
>
> this is version 02
> URL:
> https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-dnsop-maintain-ds-02.txt
> Status:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dnsop-maintain-ds/
> Htmlized:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-dnsop-maintain-ds-02
> Diff:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-dnsop-maintain-ds-02
>
> Olafur
>
> On Sun, Apr 3, 2016 at 6:29 PM, Tim Wicinski <tjw.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:
>
>> This starts a Working Group Last Call  for draft-ietf-dnsop-maintain-ds
>>
>> Current versions of the draft is available here:
>>
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dnsop-maintain-ds/
>>
>> Please review the draft and offer relevant comments. Also, if someone
>> feels the document is *not* ready for publication, please speak out with
>> your reasons.
>>
>> Feel free to show up at DNSOP's Wednesday session and voice your approval
>> or disapproval.
>>
>> This starts a two week Working Group Last Call process, and ends on
>>         17 April 2016
>>
>> thanks
>> tim
>>
>>
Looks good to me.  One more typo:

 5.  Security considerations
-- end of last sentence:
"after a certain about of wait time - thus allowing a child
   administrator to cancel the request."

"about" should be "amount"

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