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Re: [DNSOP] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-dnssec-iana-cons-04

Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org> Thu, 30 September 2021 12:05 UTC

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Subject: Re: [DNSOP] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-dnssec-iana-cons-04
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Elwyn, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot for this document.

Lars


> On 2021-9-20, at 20:55, Elwyn Davies via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
> Review result: Ready with Nits
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
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> Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-dnssec-iana-cons-04
> Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
> Review Date: 2021-09-20
> IETF LC End Date: 2021-09-16
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> 
> Summary: Ready with minor nits.
> 
> Major issues:
> None
> 
> Minor issues:
> None
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> Abstract: The longer names of DS and NSEC3 should probably be included:  Viz,
> delegation signer (DS)  and authenticated denial of existence version 3 (NSEC3).
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