Re: [dnssd] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dnssd-srp-24.txt

Chris Box <chris.box.ietf@gmail.com> Fri, 02 February 2024 11:58 UTC

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Date: Fri, 02 Feb 2024 11:58:11 +0000
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Subject: Re: [dnssd] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dnssd-srp-24.txt
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*Thank you* Ted, for working on this. I know there was a significant amount
of feedback to address. My (no-hat) opinion is that the text looks
measurably improved as a result.

I would encourage everyone to scan through the changes in the diff
<https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-dnssd-srp-24>. The
key test of course is to see if Éric and the wider IESG are happy with -24.

I feel we are nearly there.

Chris

On Tue, 30 Jan 2024 at 00:06, <internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:

> Internet-Draft draft-ietf-dnssd-srp-24.txt is now available. It is a work
> item
> of the Extensions for Scalable DNS Service Discovery (DNSSD) WG of the
> IETF.
>
>    Title:   Service Registration Protocol for DNS-Based Service Discovery
>    Authors: Ted Lemon
>             Stuart Cheshire
>    Name:    draft-ietf-dnssd-srp-24.txt
>    Pages:   40
>    Dates:   2024-01-29
>