[dnssd] Erik Kline's Yes on draft-ietf-dnssd-update-lease-08: (with COMMENT)

Erik Kline via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Mon, 07 August 2023 21:44 UTC

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Subject: [dnssd] Erik Kline's Yes on draft-ietf-dnssd-update-lease-08: (with COMMENT)

Erik Kline has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-dnssd-update-lease-08: Yes

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# Internet AD comments for draft-ietf-dnssd-update-lease-08
CC @ekline

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* "Handling Ballot Positions":
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## Nits

### S5.2

* "a Registration a Refresh"
  -> "a Registration or a Refresh"

### S5.2.1

* "send a Refresh messages" -> "message" singular?

[dnssd] Erik Kline's Yes on draft-ietf-dnssd-upda… Erik Kline via Datatracker