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Re: [dnssd] Second WGLC for draft-ietf-dnssd-srp

Qiaoyu Deng <deng.qiaoyu@gmail.com> Mon, 22 August 2022 23:43 UTC

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Subject: Re: [dnssd] Second WGLC for draft-ietf-dnssd-srp
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Hi,

I have read the draft-ietf-dnssd-srp document and think it is ready for the
next step.

I do have one suggestion about the wording though:

2.2.1. What to publish
> We refer to the DNS Update message sent by *servers* using SRP as an SRP
> Update. Three types of updates appear in an SRP update: Service Discovery
> records, Service Description records, and Host Description records.


Here the "servers" actually means the device (the requestor) that provides
the service and wants to register a service with SRP. My first impression
is that the "servers" here means the registrar. From the context, it
actually means the requestor (the client side in the SRP).

Therefore, I want to suggest that we change the text to the following:
We refer to the DNS Update message sent *on behalf of a service by an SRP
requestor* as an SRP update.

Thanks to Ted and Stuart for all the work they have done for this document.

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Qiaoyu (Joey) Deng

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