Re: [Dots] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-dots-signal-channel-31: (with COMMENT)

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From: "Konda, Tirumaleswar Reddy" <TirumaleswarReddy_Konda@McAfee.com>
To: Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Dots] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-dots-signal-channel-31: (with COMMENT)
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> -----Original Message-----
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> Subject: [Dots] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-dots-signal-
> channel-31: (with COMMENT)
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> Roman Danyliw has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-dots-signal-channel-31: No Objection
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> COMMENT:
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> A few minor items:
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> (1) Typos:
> 
> Section 3: s/signalling/signaling/
> Section 4.4.1: s/implictily/implicitly/
> 
> (2) Section 7.1, Per “The DOTS client additionally uses [RFC6125] validation
> techniques to compare the domain name with the certificate provided”, this
> sentence appears to be missing a RFC2119 word – should it read something
> like “Additionally, the DOTS client MUST use [RFC6125] validation …”?

Thanks Roman, will fix both issues.

Cheers,
-Tiru

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