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From: "Konda, Tirumaleswar Reddy" <TirumaleswarReddy_Konda@McAfee.com>
To: Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org>, "dots@ietf.org" <dots@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Dots] Items from shepherd review of draft-ietf-dots-architecture
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Hi Roman,

Please see inline

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Dots <dots-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Roman Danyliw
> Sent: Tuesday, February 5, 2019 12:34 AM
> To: dots@ietf.org
> Subject: [Dots] Items from shepherd review of draft-ietf-dots-architecture
> 
> 
> 
> Hello!
> 
> I found a few issues using idnits when completing my shepherd write-up of
> draft-ietf-dots-architecture.  Could these please be fixed and a -11 published.
> 
> (1) No IANA Considerations section.  While there is no action for IANA, the next
> needs to explicitly say something to that effect.  See Section2.2 of
> https://www.ietf.org/id-info/checklist

Fixed.

> 
> (2) A few of the references need to be updates.  From IDnits:
> 
> --[ snip ]--
>   == Outdated reference: A later version (-18) exists of
>      draft-ietf-dots-requirements-16
> 
>   == Outdated reference: A later version (-17) exists of
>      draft-ietf-dots-use-cases-16
> 
>   == Outdated reference: draft-ietf-opsawg-nat-yang has been published as RFC
>      8512

Updated

> 
>   -- Obsolete informational reference (is this intentional?): RFC 5246
>      (Obsoleted by RFC 8446)

We discussed reference to RFC5246 in DOTS signal channel draft with Benjamin, see https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/dots/n6UQxjvffL4i7hxk0o6D3eRjV20
I have updated the text as follows:

This challenge might
in part be mitigated by use of resumption via a PSK in TLS 1.3
[RFC8446] and DTLS 1.3 [I-D.ietf-tls-dtls13] (session resumption in
TLS 1.2 [RFC5246] and DTLS 1.2 [RFC6347])

Cheers,
-Tiru

> --[snip]--
> 
> Thanks,
> Roman
> 
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