Re: [Dots] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-dots-signal-call-home-11: (with COMMENT)

[Barry Leiba <[e-mail]>]

Thanks, Med, for the quick response, as always.

Barry

On Wed, Dec 16, 2020 at 1:18 AM <[e-mail]> wrote:
>
> Hi Barry,
>
> Thank you for the review.
>
> All good points. Fixed at: https://tinyurl.com/dots-call-home-latest.
>
> Cheers,
> Med
>
> > -----Message d'origine-----
> > De : Barry Leiba via Datatracker [mailto:[e-mail]]
> > Envoyé : mercredi 16 décembre 2020 05:15
> > À : The IESG <[e-mail]>
> > Cc : [e-mail]; dots-
> > [e-mail]; [e-mail]; Valery Smyslov <[e-mail]>;
> > [e-mail]
> > Objet : Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-dots-signal-call-
> > home-11: (with COMMENT)
> >
> > Barry Leiba has entered the following ballot position for
> > draft-ietf-dots-signal-call-home-11: No Objection
> >
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> > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here:
> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dots-signal-call-home/
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> > --
> > COMMENT:
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> >
> > Thanks for an easy-to-read document.  I understand Roman’s points,
> > but conclude that while a primary use case is for home networks,
> > it’s expected that the server for this will be a router that’s
> > managed by the home user’s ISP, not by the average home user.  That
> > setup is increasingly common, at least in the U.S., and it’s enabled
> > many such functions that were not practical when users had to
> > provide and manage their own routers.
> >
> > I just have a few very minor comments:
> >
> > — Section 1.1 —
> >
> >    Such misbehaviors will have both a collateral
> >    damage that affects end users, and can harm the reputation of an
> >    Internet Service Provider (ISP) for being a source of attack
> > traffic.
> >
> > Nit: This sentence isn’t properly formed, as the two pieces of the
> > “both”
> > construction aren’t parallel.  I suggest this:
> >
> > NEW
> >    Such misbehaviors can cause collateral damage
> >    that will affect end users, and can also harm the reputation of
> > an
> >    Internet Service Provider (ISP) for being a source of attack
> > traffic.
> > END
> >
> > — Section 5.1 —
> >
> >    enabling means for automating the
> >    provisioning of credentials on Call Home DOTS servers to
> > authenticate
> >    to the Call Home DOTS client are encouraged.
> >
> > Nit: the subject of this is the singular “enabling”, so “enabling
> > <stuff> is encouraged,” not “are”.
> >
> > — Section 7 —
> > Throughout the IANA Considerations, please make the contact points
> > and change controller be “IETF” (not IESG nor IETF Chair), and use
> > the email address <[e-mail]>.  That’s what the IESG considers
> > the best way to refer to items where the IETF has change control.
> >
> >
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