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Re: [dtn-interest] Update to bundle protocol spec.

Wesley Eddy <weddy@grc.nasa.gov> Wed, 14 March 2007 18:06 UTC

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Date: Wed, 14 Mar 2007 14:02:52 -0400
From: Wesley Eddy <weddy@grc.nasa.gov>
To: "Scott, Keith L." <kscott@mitre.org>
Cc: dtn-interest@mailman.dtnrg.org
Subject: Re: [dtn-interest] Update to bundle protocol spec.
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On Wed, Mar 14, 2007 at 01:18:16PM -0400, Scott, Keith L. wrote:
> 
> Attached is version 9 of the bundle protocol specification with the
> changes to section 3.3 (Bundle Processing Control Flags) and 3.4 (Block
> Processing Control Flags).  These are updates we discussed a while
> back.  I'd like to submit this ASAP after the draft submission process
> opens again on the 19th, so please have a look and let me know if you
> see any problems.


I suggest running this through idnits.  There are a bunch of things that
get flagged, all of which look easy to fix:

idnits 2.04.01 

tmp/draft-irtf-dtnrg-bundle-spec-09.txt:
tmp/draft-irtf-dtnrg-bundle-spec-09.txt(546): Line has weird spacing: '...thin an  objec...'
tmp/draft-irtf-dtnrg-bundle-spec-09.txt(1522): Line is too long: the offending characters are 'm'
tmp/draft-irtf-dtnrg-bundle-spec-09.txt(2094): Line has weird spacing: '...cceeded  flag ...'
tmp/draft-irtf-dtnrg-bundle-spec-09.txt(2099): Line has weird spacing: '...cceeded  flag ...'
tmp/draft-irtf-dtnrg-bundle-spec-09.txt(2118): Line has weird spacing: '...   the  operat...'
tmp/draft-irtf-dtnrg-bundle-spec-09.txt(2269): Line is too long: the offending characters are 'g'
tmp/draft-irtf-dtnrg-bundle-spec-09.txt(2274): Found non-ascii character () in position 55.
tmp/draft-irtf-dtnrg-bundle-spec-09.txt(2295): Line has weird spacing: '...versity  of  C...'
tmp/draft-irtf-dtnrg-bundle-spec-09.txt(2300): Line has weird spacing: '...   most  of  t...'


  Checking boilerplate required by RFC 3978 and 3979, updated by RFC 4748:
  * This document has an original RFC 3978 Section 5.4 Copyright Line,
    instead of the newer IETF Trust Copyright according to RFC 4748.
  * This document has an original RFC 3978 Section 5.5 Disclaimer, instead of
    the newer disclaimer which includes the IETF Trust according to RFC 4748.

  Checking nits according to http://www.ietf.org/ietf/1id-guidelines.txt:
  * There is 1 instance of lines with non-ascii characters in the document.
  - No 'Intended status' indicated for this document; assuming Proposed
    Standard

  Checking nits according to http://www.ietf.org/ID-Checklist.html:
  * There are 2 instances of too long lines in the document, the longest one
    being 1 character in excess of 72.

  Miscellaneous warnings:
  - The copyright year in the RFC 3978 Section 5.4 Copyright Line does not
    match the current year

  Checking references for intended status: Proposed Standard
  - Unused Reference: 'RFC3978' is defined on line 1958, but not referenced
    '[RFC3978]   Bradner, S., "IETF Rights in Contributions", BCP 78, RFC 3...'

  - Unused Reference: 'RFC3979' is defined on line 1961, but not referenced
    '[RFC3979]   Bradner, S., "Intellectual Property Rights in IETF Technol...'

  - Unused Reference: '4' is defined on line 1982, but not referenced
    '[4] Mills, D., "Network Time Protocol (Version 3) Specification, Imple...'

  * Obsolete normative reference: RFC 2717
  - Outdated reference: A later version (-08) exists of
    draft-irtf-dtnrg-arch-03
  - Outdated reference: A later version (-02) exists of
    draft-irtf-dtnrg-bundle-security-00
  - Outdated reference: A later version (-02) exists of
    draft-irtf-dtnrg-sec-overview-00

    Summary: 5 errors, 8 warnings

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