Re: [dtn-interest] Update to bundle protocol spec.

["Scott, Keith L." <[e-mail]>]

Right, I'll do that later, just wanted to make sure we had consensus on
the words first.

  --keith


----- Original Message -----
From: Wesley Eddy <[e-mail]>
To: Scott, Keith L.
Cc: [e-mail] <[e-mail]>
Sent: Wed Mar 14 14:02:52 2007
Subject: Re: [dtn-interest] Update to bundle protocol spec.

On Wed, Mar 14, 2007 at 01:18:16PM -0400, Scott, Keith L. wrote:
> 
> Attached is version 9 of the bundle protocol specification with the
> changes to section 3.3 (Bundle Processing Control Flags) and 3.4
(Block
> Processing Control Flags).  These are updates we discussed a while
> back.  I'd like to submit this ASAP after the draft submission
process
> opens again on the 19th, so please have a look and let me know if you
> see any problems.


I suggest running this through idnits.  There are a bunch of things
that
get flagged, all of which look easy to fix:

idnits 2.04.01 

tmp/draft-irtf-dtnrg-bundle-spec-09.txt:
tmp/draft-irtf-dtnrg-bundle-spec-09.txt(546): Line has weird spacing:
'...thin an  objec...'
tmp/draft-irtf-dtnrg-bundle-spec-09.txt(1522): Line is too long: the
offending characters are 'm'
tmp/draft-irtf-dtnrg-bundle-spec-09.txt(2094): Line has weird spacing:
'...cceeded  flag ...'
tmp/draft-irtf-dtnrg-bundle-spec-09.txt(2099): Line has weird spacing:
'...cceeded  flag ...'
tmp/draft-irtf-dtnrg-bundle-spec-09.txt(2118): Line has weird spacing:
'...   the  operat...'
tmp/draft-irtf-dtnrg-bundle-spec-09.txt(2269): Line is too long: the
offending characters are 'g'
tmp/draft-irtf-dtnrg-bundle-spec-09.txt(2274): Found non-ascii
character () in position 55.
tmp/draft-irtf-dtnrg-bundle-spec-09.txt(2295): Line has weird spacing:
'...versity  of  C...'
tmp/draft-irtf-dtnrg-bundle-spec-09.txt(2300): Line has weird spacing:
'...   most  of  t...'


  Checking boilerplate required by RFC 3978 and 3979, updated by RFC
4748:
  * This document has an original RFC 3978 Section 5.4 Copyright Line,
    instead of the newer IETF Trust Copyright according to RFC 4748.
  * This document has an original RFC 3978 Section 5.5 Disclaimer,
instead of
    the newer disclaimer which includes the IETF Trust according to RFC
4748.

  Checking nits according to
http://www.ietf.org/ietf/1id-guidelines.txt:
  * There is 1 instance of lines with non-ascii characters in the
document.
  - No 'Intended status' indicated for this document; assuming Proposed
    Standard

  Checking nits according to http://www.ietf.org/ID-Checklist.html:
  * There are 2 instances of too long lines in the document, the
longest one
    being 1 character in excess of 72.

  Miscellaneous warnings:
  - The copyright year in the RFC 3978 Section 5.4 Copyright Line does
not
    match the current year

  Checking references for intended status: Proposed Standard
  - Unused Reference: 'RFC3978' is defined on line 1958, but not
referenced
    '[RFC3978]   Bradner, S., "IETF Rights in Contributions", BCP 78,
RFC 3...'

  - Unused Reference: 'RFC3979' is defined on line 1961, but not
referenced
    '[RFC3979]   Bradner, S., "Intellectual Property Rights in IETF
Technol...'

  - Unused Reference: '4' is defined on line 1982, but not referenced
    '[4] Mills, D., "Network Time Protocol (Version 3) Specification,
Imple...'

  * Obsolete normative reference: RFC 2717
  - Outdated reference: A later version (-08) exists of
    draft-irtf-dtnrg-arch-03
  - Outdated reference: A later version (-02) exists of
    draft-irtf-dtnrg-bundle-security-00
  - Outdated reference: A later version (-02) exists of
    draft-irtf-dtnrg-sec-overview-00

    Summary: 5 errors, 8 warnings