Re: [dtn] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dtn-tcpclv4-16.txt [AD-INT]

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To: Magnus Westerlund <magnus.westerlund=40ericsson.com@dmarc.ietf.org>, "dtn@ietf.org" <dtn@ietf.org>, "BSipos@rkf-eng.com" <BSipos@rkf-eng.com>
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[ AIRBUS DEFENCE AND SPACE INTERNAL ]
Magnus,

The consensus of the WG is to obsolete BPv6 and by extension TCPCLv3.

Let's try not to keep going around this buoy ;)

Rick



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From: dtn [mailto:dtn-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Magnus Westerlund
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To: dtn@ietf.org; BSipos@rkf-eng.com
Subject: Re: [dtn] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dtn-tcpclv4-16.txt

On Tue, 2019-11-26 at 19:26 +0000, Brian Sipos wrote:
> Magnus,
> I've asked for a SECDIR review of last changes to the draft.
> 
> The port assignee and contact being the IESG makes sense to me and I 
> will update the draft to reflect this.
> 
> The use of two reference RFCs doesn't make sense to me, though, and I 
> don't see any examples of this in the current IANA registry. The 
> TCPCLv4 supersedes
> v3 and is entity-level interoperable with v3. The RFC-TBA also 
> references
> RFC7242 internally, so if the IANA port registration of just RFC-TBA 
> will allow someone to trace back to RFC7242 if they need to. Seeing 
> one port with two separate protocol versions in the reference seems confusing.

So my goal here was that there would be clear that there might be multiple different versions using this particular port.

What was confusing me here and lead me down the reasoning that both should be listed was the expectation that BPv6 and its usage of TCPclv3 would not be directly obsoleted, and definitely not disapear from usage. Re-reading the IANA section and looking at this document I think it is clear that if you actually go look in this docuemnt, you can figure out that TCPclv3 may also be used on this port. Thus, a single reference is fine with me after this additional consideration. 

And if we are back to having BPv7 obsolete BPv6, then I think having this direct obosletion is fine. If we are not having the first, this document's obsoletion of TCPclv3 needs another thought. I note that we have not been consistent in our actions due to the obsoletion discussion. 

Cheers

Magnus



> 
>  From: Magnus Westerlund
> Sent: Monday, November 25, 2019 04:27
> To: dtn@ietf.org; Brian Sipos
> Subject: Re: [dtn] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dtn-tcpclv4-16.txt
> 
> Hi Brian,
> 
> Can you please try to get feedback on the update from the Secdir 
> reviewer, or if you already have, it provide a pointer to that.
> 
> Anyway, looking at the update I did find an issue we need to fix. 
> 
> In Section 9.1 the Update to the dtn-bundle TCPCL port registration. 
> 
> As this is an IETF protocol now, the assigne should be:
> 
> IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
> 
> IESG have had some discussion about the contact person and if that 
> also should be the IESG, the WG or an individual. The argument for 
> making it to IESG is that it likely to be more long term stable that 
> the other options. But, this is more open to discussion, so consider 
> what makes most sense long term and use that.
> 
> When it comes to references I think there is a point to list both the 
> RFC-TBA as well as RFC7242 that defines the earlier version. But, 
> please list RFC7242 after this docuemnt.
> 
> Cheers
> 
> Magnus
> 
> 
> 
> 
> On Fri, 2019-11-22 at 22:18 +0000, Brian Sipos wrote:
> > All,
> > This latest draft of TCPCLv4 addresses comments from SECDIR review 
> > and IANA review. It does not change any of the messaging structure, 
> > only clarifies behaviors related to TLS use and sequencing, and 
> > fixes some contradictory text.
> > From: dtn <dtn-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of 
> > internet-drafts@ietf.org < internet-drafts@ietf.org>
> > Sent: Friday, November 22, 2019 17:04
> > To: i-d-announce@ietf.org <i-d-announce@ietf.org>
> > Cc: dtn@ietf.org <dtn@ietf.org>
> > Subject: [dtn] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dtn-tcpclv4-16.txt
> >  
> > 
> > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts 
> > directories.
> > This draft is a work item of the Delay/Disruption Tolerant 
> > Networking WG of the IETF.
> > 
> >         Title           : Delay-Tolerant Networking TCP Convergence Layer
> > Protocol Version 4
> >         Authors         : Brian Sipos
> >                           Michael Demmer
> >                           Joerg Ott
> >                           Simon Perreault
> >         Filename        : draft-ietf-dtn-tcpclv4-16.txt
> >         Pages           : 63
> >         Date            : 2019-11-22
> > 
> > Abstract:
> >    This document describes a revised protocol for the TCP-based
> >    convergence layer (TCPCL) for Delay-Tolerant Networking (DTN).  The
> >    protocol revision is based on implementation issues in the original
> >    TCPCL Version 3 of RFC7242 and updates to the Bundle Protocol
> >    contents, encodings, and convergence layer requirements in Bundle
> >    Protocol Version 7.  Specifically, the TCPCLv4 uses CBOR-encoded BPv7
> >    bundles as its service data unit being transported and provides a
> >    reliable transport of such bundles.  Several new IANA registries are
> >    defined for TCPCLv4 which define some behaviors inherited from
> >    TCPCLv3 but with updated encodings and/or semantics.
> > 
> > 
> > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dtn-tcpclv4/
> > 
> > There are also htmlized versions available at:
> > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-dtn-tcpclv4-16
> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-dtn-tcpclv4-16
> > 
> > A diff from the previous version is available at:
> > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-dtn-tcpclv4-16
> > 
> > 
> > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of 
> > submission until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
> > 
> > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
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