Re: [Ecrit] Mirja Kühlewind's No Objection on draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall-23: (with COMMENT)

[Randall Gellens <[e-mail]>]

Hi Mirja,

Thanks for your review.  Please see inline.

At 5:05 AM -0800 1/17/17, Mirja Kuehlewind wrote:

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>  Minor comments:
>  - sec 9.1.1.1: Is there a case where 'received' could be not 'true'. I
>  mean how can you acknowledge something that you didn't receive?

That section says "this <ack> element indicates 
if the PSAP considers the MSD successfully 
received or not."  Unlike legacy (CS) eCall, the 
MSD can't get corrupted during transit, but it's 
possible that there is a bug in either the IVS's 
creation of the MSD or the PSAP's interpretation 
of it.

>  - I find the wording used saying "This document registers .." (in the
>  whole document) not fully approrpiate because the main purpose of this
>  doc is the spcification of the usage of these registrations. I would
>  propose the following, e.g.
>  OLD
>  "This document registers "urn:service:test.sos.ecall" for eCall test
>  calls."
>  NEW
>  "This document specifies "urn:service:test.sos.ecall" for eCall test
>  calls and registers it in section X."

I reviewed each use of "registers" in the 
document; to me, the uses are appropriate and 
except for the service URNs that you mention, 
alternative wording would be awkward.  I did make 
the changes you suggest for the service URNs 
(both "SOS" and "test").

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Randall Gellens
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