Re: [Ecrit] Alexey Melnikov's Discuss on draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall-22: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

[Randall Gellens <[e-mail]>]

Hi Alexey,

Thanks for your review and comments.  Please see inline.

At 3:18 AM -0800 1/15/17, Alexey Melnikov wrote:

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>  This is a well written document. I have only a couple of minor issues I
>  would like to discuss before recommending approval:
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>  1) +per media type suffix needs to be registered in
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> <http://www.iana.org/assignments/media-type-structured-suffix/media-type-structured-suffix.xhtml#structured-syntax-suffix>

I added this to the draft.

>  2) In 9.1.1.2: should "details" element allow for language tag XML
>  attribute? Should this element be allowed to appear multiple times with
>  different language tags in order to allow for multiple human readable
>  reasons (in different languages)?

"Details" is a parameter, not an element, and hence cannot appear 
multiple times.  The intent is for internal use and troubleshooting, 
not for display to users.  I'm not sure there would be enough benefit 
to change it to an element to permit multiple occurrences and to have 
a language tag.

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>  On page 23, in the example: typo Content-Dispositio

Fixed, thanks.

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