Re: [Ecrit] AD Evaluation: draft-ietf-ecrit-lost-servicelistboundary-04

Robert Sparks <rjsparks@nostrum.com> Wed, 24 November 2010 13:57 UTC

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>> At the top of page 10, the phrase "so no boundary information is reasonable" is ambiguous. Is it trying to say
>> "there is no boundary information that is reasonable to send" or "it is reasonable to send no boundary information"?
> 
> Would putting the sentence this way make it clearer:
> The <listServices> request is purely for diagnostic purposes and does
> not contain location information at all, so boundary information
> cannot be calculated.
> 

Yes - thanks!

> 
> Thank you for your suggestions, I'll note them.
> 
> Karl Heinz