Re: [Ecrit] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall-12.txt

Hi,

I gave some comments on the draft to Randall before it was published, and he has addressed much of it.

Apart from some editorial comments that I still have, my main issue is still section 6.

My proposal was that we describe both mechanisms (for INFOs and for non-INFOs). Then, when we describe the mechanism for INFO (i.e., usage of info package) we describe that the Call-Info etc can be used to align etc (that has also been done in Section 10, which defines the info package).

But, section 6 contains 3 paragraphs talking about the additional data mechanism, and then there is one sentence that mentions INFO.

My suggestion is to separate section 6 into sub sections: one general, one describing the additional data mechanism, and one describing the info package mechanism.

Regards,

Christer

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A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Emergency Context Resolution with Internet Technologies of the IETF.

        Title           : Next-Generation Pan-European eCall
        Authors         : Randall Gellens
                          Hannes Tschofenig
	Filename        : draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall-12.txt
	Pages           : 43
	Date            : 2016-09-21

Abstract:
   This document describes how to use IP-based emergency services
   mechanisms to support the next generation of the Pan European in-
   vehicle emergency call service defined under the eSafety initiative
   of the European Commission (generally referred to as "eCall"). eCall
   is a standardized and mandated system for a special form of emergency
   calls placed by vehicles, providing real-time communications and an
   integrated set of related data.

   This document also registers MIME Content Types and an Emergency Call
   Additional Data Blocks for the eCall vehicle data and metadata/
   control data.

The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall/

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Re: [Ecrit] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ecrit-ecall-12.txt - Christer's comments