Re: [Emu] Adoption call for EAP-DPP

Behcet Sarikaya <sarikaya2012@gmail.com> Wed, 17 August 2022 21:37 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Emu] Adoption call for EAP-DPP
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Hi Peter,

I quickly read this short document and have some comments.

In the informative references section, DPP is listed as Device Provisioning
Profile while it should be Device Provisioning Protocol.
Actually, in the acronyms section the name is correctly given. However, the
DPP acronym is not properly expanded in the first use of the acronym which
is in Section 1. Also the same could be said of the other acronyms.

Also the date of DPP document seems to be wrong, I think the version 1.1
was dated 2018.

Probably more seriously though, the document says DPP does not support
wired network access in Section 1 but maybe the authors are not aware that
there is something called wired only DPP which is defined in another WiFi
Alliance document in Section 2.3.5 of

Wi-Fi Easy ConnectTM Specification v2.0
This document is dated 2020, maybe the authors should reference this
document then the date will be correct 👍🏻.

Behcet

On Tue, Aug 16, 2022 at 3:12 PM Peter Yee <peter@akayla.com> wrote:

> This is an adoption call for EAP-DPP (draft-friel-tls-eap-dpp-05)[1]. This
> document aligns with the charter item to "Define mechanisms by which EAP
> methods can support creation of long-term credentials for the peer based on
> initial limited-use credentials." The latest revision incorporates feedback
> from both the TLS and EMU working groups. Please review and respond to the
> list if you think this document is or is not an appropriate working group
> item for EMU by September 1, 2022.
>
> Thanks,
>
> Peter and Joe
>
> [1] https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-friel-tls-eap-dpp/
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