Re: [Emu] draft-ietf-emu-eap-tls13-16.txt

Alan DeKok <aland@deployingradius.com> Thu, 17 June 2021 17:55 UTC

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On Jun 17, 2021, at 12:04 PM, John Mattsson <john.mattsson@ericsson.com> wrote:
> I have made a single PR addressing all the currently listed issues in the way suggested by Joe.
>  
> https://github.com/emu-wg/draft-ietf-emu-eap-tls13/pull/83/files
>  
> - Does PR #83 address the currently listed issues?

  I'll have to go through it and see.  It's normally traditional to respond to reviews.  And, to reply with proposed text for the document update.  That process allows reviewers to quickly see if their issues have been addressed.

  The current use of GitHub makes this process rather more opaque.  There are changes to the document pushed as commits, but it requires rooting through multiple commits and references in order to see which commit addresses which issue.  The many commits of "updated document" make it more difficult to see what is changed, and why.

> - Are there any other remaining issues that are not listed on GitHub?

  My review of a few days ago had extensive comments.  It may be worth going through that and addressing each issue.  Some of the items have been addressed, which is positive.  However, it looks like all of my comments for Section 5 remain unaddressed.

  Alan DeKok.