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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-json-i-json-05

Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com> Fri, 23 January 2015 18:16 UTC

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Hi Tim,
   thanks for considering, please see inline.

Best Regards,
Meral

On 01/22/2015 06:13 PM, Tim Bray wrote:
> <editor-hat>
>
> On Wed, Jan 14, 2015 at 1:00 AM, Meral Shirazipour 
> <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com 
> <mailto:meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com>> wrote:
>
>     Nits/editorial comments:
>
>     -Please spell out acronyms at first use. E.g. JSON, I-JSON
>
>
> ​I disagree.  People know what JSON stands for, and for those who 
> don’t spelling it out wouldn’t help.  De facto, the name of the format 
> is JSON.  Also, the mention of JavaScript is a red herring.​
I agree for JSON, but I-JSON I had to look it up.
>
>     -[Page 3], "treat an integer", it would be good to mention this is
>     still referring to IEEE754 format.
>
>
> ​I disagree.  It’s talking about the sequence of digits in the I-JSON 
> text, irrespective of any binary format.​
was not clear to me, thanks for clarifying.
> ​
>
>     -[Page 3],"(one example would be 64-bit integers)", here not clear
>     if still IEEE7544 is discussed or integer format. If latter, is it
>     signed/unsigned.
>
>     "RECOMMENDED to encode them in JSON string values." should this be
>     done in decimal format then?
>
>
> ​I think this has been discussed elsewhere on teh thread. It’s 
> irritating that 64-bit integers would be string-encoded even though 
> most computers can handle them in hardware, but it is a real plus for 
> interoperability.  Anyhow, the place where this advice really applies 
> is for​ huge crypto integers.
yes, that part of the text was not clear to me. For a standards track 
RFC it may be worth taking another look at it.
>
>     -[Page 4], Section 3, "in the JSON messages it receives."--->"in
>     the JSON messages they receives."
>
>
> ​er, “er, they receive’. Yup.  ​
>
> ​​
>
>     ​​
>     -[Page 4], "receiving implementation"---->"receiving implementations"
>
>
> ​Yup.​
>
> ​​
>
>     Best Regards,
>
>     Meral
>
>     ---
>
>     Meral Shirazipour
>
>     Ericsson
>
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