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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-json-i-json-05

Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com> Thu, 22 January 2015 17:35 UTC

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From: Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-json-i-json-05
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Hi,
  I have not heard from the authors. My 2nd and 3rd comments on [page 3] would need more attention.

Best ,
Meral

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Jari Arkko [mailto:jari.arkko@piuha.net]
> Sent: Thursday, January 22, 2015 3:38 AM
> To: Meral Shirazipour
> Cc: draft-ietf-json-i-json.all@tools.ietf.org; gen-art@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-json-i-json-05
> 
> Thanks for your review, Meral.
> 
> Have you authors observed the comments and taken all actions that you
> think are necessary?
> 
> FWIW, I have placed the following position on the ballot for tonight's IESG
> call:
> 
> No Objection - I should note that there was a Gen-ART review from Meral
> with some minor editorial observations. For instance, the first sentence of
> Section 3 could use improvement. These could be handled by the RFC Editor,
> too.
> 
> jari
> 
> On 14 Jan 2015, at 10:00, Meral Shirazipour
> <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com> wrote:
> 
> > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-
> ART, please see the FAQ at
> http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq.
> >
> > Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
> you may receive.
> >
> > Document: draft-ietf-json-i-json-05
> > Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
> > Review Date: 2015-01-14
> > IETF LC End Date:  2015-01-14
> > IESG Telechat date: NA
> >
> >
> > Summary:
> > This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some
> comments .
> >
> >
> > Nits/editorial comments:
> > -Please spell out acronyms at first use. E.g. JSON, I-JSON
> >
> > -[Page 3], "treat an integer", it would be good to mention this is still
> referring to IEEE754 format.
> >
> > -[Page 3],"(one example would be 64-bit integers)", here not clear if still
> IEEE7544 is discussed or integer format. If latter, is it signed/unsigned.
> > "RECOMMENDED to encode them in JSON string values." should this be
> done in decimal format then?
> >
> > -[Page 4], Section 3, "in the JSON messages it receives."--->"in the JSON
> messages they receives."
> >
> > -[Page 4], "receiving implementation"---->"receiving implementations"
> >
> > Best Regards,
> > Meral
> > ---
> > Meral Shirazipour
> > Ericsson
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