[Gen-art] Re: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-ason-lexicography-06

Thanks Harald,

> For background on Gen-ART, please see
> http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html.
>
> Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-ason-lexicography-06.txt
> Reviewer: Harald Tveit Alvestrand
> Date: Jan 14, 2006
> Trigger: IESG telechat submission for Informational
> Summary: Ready for publication.
>
> This document, despite the caveats in the start ("don't try to use this
> unless you know these 20 other documents by heart") is pretty readable,
and
> I think it will prove useful.
>
> It provides for mapping GMPLS terms into ASON terms; I think it would be
> harder to use it the other way around. Mapping's unlikely to be perfect
in
> any case, so picking this approach and sticking to it is a Good Thing.
>
> Very well done job!
>
> Nits:
>
> The document introduction contains random blank lines. I expect that the
> RFC Editor will find them and make sure the paragraphs make sense.
>
> In section 3.9.1, H-LSP is not called out as a definition. I noticed
only
> because it maps to a specific ITU-T term. Text is clear enough that a
> reader shouldn't be bothered by this, however; not worth holding the doc
> for.

I take this to mean that a new revision is NOT needed as a result of
GenArt review and the process can continue without further input from the
authors at this stage.

Cheers,
Adrian

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