[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-kitten-extended-mech-inquiry-06.txt
Suresh Krishnan <suresh.krishnan@ericsson.com> Tue, 26 May 2009 22:13 UTC
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for draft-ietf-kitten-extended-mech-inquiry-06.txt For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as Proposed Standard. Substantial =========== * Section 3.4.4 Shouldn't the output "name" be released with GSS_Release_buffer() as well? Minor ===== * The IANA considerations section describes the policy for future allocations as "IESG Protocol Action". Is it possible to use a known policy (Standards Action or IESG Approval, perhaps) for this? * Section 3.4.3 GSS_Inquire_mech_attrs_for_mech() needs to be replaced by GSS_Inquire_attrs_for_mech() as the former does not exist. Editorial ========== * Section 3.4.6: Replace "To avoid this error we hereby define new typdefs which ^^^^^^^ with "To avoid this error we hereby define new typedefs which * IANA Considerations s/namsepace/namespace/ Thanks Suresh
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-kitten-ext… Suresh Krishnan
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-kitten… Nicolas Williams
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-kitten… Suresh Krishnan