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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-kucherawy-marf-source-ports-03

"Murray S. Kucherawy" <msk@cloudmark.com> Tue, 15 May 2012 18:15 UTC

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From: "Murray S. Kucherawy" <msk@cloudmark.com>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-kucherawy-marf-source-ports-03
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> -----Original Message-----
> From: david.black@emc.com [mailto:david.black@emc.com]
> Sent: Tuesday, May 15, 2012 11:12 AM
> To: richard.clayton@cl.cam.ac.uk; Murray S. Kucherawy; gen-art@ietf.org
> Cc: david.black@emc.com; johnl@iecc.com; barryleiba@computer.org
> Subject: Gen-ART review of draft-kucherawy-marf-source-ports-03
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
> Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Ah, David.  We meet again.  :-)

> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
> you may receive.
> 
> Document: draft-kucherawy-marf-source-ports-03
> Reviewer: David L. Black
> Review Date: May 15, 2012
> IETF LC End Date: June 4, 2012
> 
> This is a short draft that adds source ports to the Abuse Reporting
> Format for mail abuse reporting.
> 
> Summary:
> This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should
> be fixed before publication.
> 
> Major issues: None.
> 
> Minor issues: None.
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> 
>   In section 3, please summarize what the "CFWS" ABNF element
> represents (comments and folding white space).
> 
>   Typo in last paragraph of section 3: "RECOMMENED" -> "RECOMMENDED"

Sounds reasonable to me.  I'll include both of those in -04 after LC closes.

Thanks for the review!

Cheers,
-MSK

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