Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-behave-dccp-03.txt

"Miguel A. Garcia" <Miguel.A.Garcia@ericsson.com> Mon, 20 October 2008 06:54 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-behave-dccp-03.txt
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Rémi Denis-Courmont wrote:
>> 2) As a matter of personal taste, I don't like to mention names of
>> working groups in RFCs. This is because WGs are temporal arrangements.
>> They stop existing after a few years, while RFCs are permanent. So,
>> "BEHAVE" might not mean anything in the near future. This comment is due
>> to the reference to "BEHAVE" in the abstract.
> 
> So like "published by the IETF" instead of "published by the BEHAVE wg"?

Yeap, I think your proposal sounds fine.


/Miguel


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