[Gen-art] (preliminary) review of draft-ietf-imss-fc-fcsp-mib-02.txt
Francis Dupont <Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr> Tue, 24 June 2008 07:21 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] (preliminary) review of draft-ietf-imss-fc-fcsp-mib-02.txt
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I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-imss-fc-fcsp-mib-02.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 2008-06-19 IETF LC End Date: 2008-06-19 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Comments: I've found only a low number of editorial (i.e., to be handled by the RFC Editor) problems (spelling errors, typos, raw abbrevs, ...). I'll send ASAP the list in a full review (full here is mainly for the human (vs. machine) part of the document, the MIB itself will be checked with the usual tools). Regards Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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