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[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pce-disco-proto-isis-08.txt

"Vijay K. Gurbani" <vkg@alcatel-lucent.com> Tue, 02 October 2007 20:43 UTC

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Document: draft-ietf-pce-disco-proto-isis-08.txt
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: 2 Oct 2007
IESG Telechat date: 4 Oct 2007

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard.

One nit:

- S2, towards the end of page 4:
     s/([IS-IS-CAP])/[IS-IS-CAP]/
   that is, any special reason to put the reference in brackets?
   If not, simply remove the brackets for readability.

Thanks.

- vijay
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