RE: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pce-disco-proto-isis-08.txt

Hi Vijay

We will clear this nit

Thanks a lot for this review

JL 

> -----Message d'origine-----
> De : Vijay K. Gurbani [mailto:vkg@alcatel-lucent.com] 
> Envoyé : mardi 2 octobre 2007 22:42
> À : LE ROUX Jean-Louis RD-CORE-LAN; jpv@cisco.com; 
> y.ikejiri@ntt.com; raymond_zhang@bt-infonet.com
> Cc : General Area Review Team; zzx-adrian@olddog.co.uk; Ross Callon
> Objet : [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of 
> draft-ietf-pce-disco-proto-isis-08.txt 
> 
> I have been selected as the General Area Review Team 
> (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, 
> please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
> 
> Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD 
> before posting a new version of the draft.
> 
> Document: draft-ietf-pce-disco-proto-isis-08.txt
> Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
> Review Date: 2 Oct 2007
> IESG Telechat date: 4 Oct 2007
> 
> Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard.
> 
> One nit:
> 
> - S2, towards the end of page 4:
>      s/([IS-IS-CAP])/[IS-IS-CAP]/
>    that is, any special reason to put the reference in brackets?
>    If not, simply remove the brackets for readability.
> 
> Thanks.
> 
> - vijay
> --
> Vijay K. Gurbani, Bell Laboratories, Alcatel-Lucent
> 2701 Lucent Lane, Rm. 9F-546, Lisle, Illinois 60532 (USA)
> Email: vkg@{alcatel-lucent.com,bell-labs.com,acm.org}
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