Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-capwap-dhc-ac-option-01.txt

Francis Dupont <Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr> Sun, 13 July 2008 09:49 UTC

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From: Francis Dupont <Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr>
To: "Pat Calhoun (pacalhou)" <pcalhoun@cisco.com>
In-reply-to: Your message of Fri, 11 Jul 2008 18:13:09 PDT. <4FF84B0BC277FF45AA27FE969DD956A20614EBDC@xmb-sjc-235.amer.cisco.com>
Date: Sun, 13 Jul 2008 11:49:41 +0200
Cc: dromasca@avaya.com, gen-art@ietf.org
Subject: Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-capwap-dhc-ac-option-01.txt
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 In your previous mail you wrote:

    - in TOC and section 6: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments 
   <PRC> I think perhaps your version is the queen's english, while mine is
   the one accepted in the US :(
   
=> there is no (not yet?) gen-art review FAQ but if the two spelling
exist the RFC Editor loudly insists to use the one without the 'e'...

Thanks
   
Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr

PS: you should have noted Ralph Droms' comment about v4/v6 option naming.
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