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Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-bess-fat-pw-bgp-03.txt

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Tue, 20 February 2018 21:44 UTC

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From: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>
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Date: Tue, 20 Feb 2018 13:44:06 -0800
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-bess-fat-pw-bgp-03.txt
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Francis, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot.

Alissa

> On Feb 14, 2018, at 7:58 AM, Francis Dupont <Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr> wrote:
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
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> Document: draft-ietf-bess-fat-pw-bgp-03.txt
> Reviewer: Francis Dupont
> Review Date: 2018/02/07
> IETF LC End Date: 20180209
> IESG Telechat date: unknown
> 
> Summary: Ready
> 
> Major issues: None
> 
> Minor issues: None
> 
> Nits/editorial comments: 
> - Abstract page 1: please expand PE abbrev
> 
> - PoC page 2 and 4 page 7: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments
> 
> - 1 page 3: please introduce PE abbrev (it is not marked as well known
>  in https://www.rfc-editor.org/materials/abbrev.expansion.txt, and
>  Abstract and body are independent so an abbrev introduced in the Abstract
>  should be introduced again in the body).
> 
> - 1 page 3: ECMP is introduced twice (better than none :-).
> 
> - 1 page 3: This draft -> This document (or specification ot ...).
>  The RFC Editor should update this prior to the publication but
>  making its job harder is not a good idea. So if you have another
>  reason to update the document please fix this...
> 
> -  1.1 page 4: RFC 2119 was updated by RFC 8174
> 
> - 3 page 6: e.g. -> e.g.,
> 
> - 3 page 7: i.e. -> i.e., (at end of line)
> 
> Regards
> 
> Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr
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