[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pce-pcep-stateful-pce-gmpls-21

Stewart Bryant via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Fri, 02 June 2023 09:28 UTC

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Subject: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pce-pcep-stateful-pce-gmpls-21

Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review result: Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-pce-pcep-stateful-pce-gmpls-21
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 2023-06-02
IETF LC End Date: 2023-05-29
IESG Telechat date: 2023-06-08

Summary:

I reviewed this from a GenArt perspective (a reader new to the area) and have
one request : that early in the document a few sentences be added (copied from
another text) clarifying the difference between stateless and stateful PCE.

This document is otherwise ready to pass to the RFC Editor team.

I note that id-nits picks up a number of errors regarding references (RFC 2119
language and technical references), but the ones I checked seem correct, so I
am not sure what is happening.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: The absence of an early description of stateful PCE as noted
above.

Nits/editorial comments:

   Further discussion of concept of a stateful PCE can be found in
SB> of the concept

   For passive stateful PCEs, Path Computation Request (PCReq)/ Path
   Computation Reply (PCRep) messages are used to request for path
   computation.
SB> grammar problem

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